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too much grammatical errors, and not much logically sequenced...put some more effort on it..and come up with a better structured approach
Originally Posted by pranav_nik
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after my stint in INDIAN Army ended unfortunately, --- change this dont write unfortunately, need to be positive in SOP
Originally Posted by harshil.agrawal
correct some parallelism errors
and be sure abt why only HR as you are specifically mentioning it..research on HR profiles that have been offered at FMS.
and if you dont want to mention HR , then just write general and say that you havent much thought of it
Best of luck
An important thing missing Why FMS ?? all u have written is about why MBA ,rather Why HR !
Originally Posted by harshil.agrawal
and also this academic geek thing looks awkward..
and because u have this distinction of being in army for 2 yrs , which obviously separates u of the rest , dont put it right at the beginning, start with something philosophical , any quote or something and then put it as an example from ur own life.
PS : i m still an MBA aspirant and not a qualified critic , so please dont expect expert comments and ignore if comments found useless.
Here's my SOP. Written in a hurry ... as the deadline is very close. Please provide your valuable suggestions and corrections which are need to be done ...
I think i've to shrink it too. since its still 186 words ...
thanks in anticipations
After finishing my B-tech in Electronics and communication form IIIT-Hyderabad, I joined a semiconductor start up. From a novice college graduate to a Senior Design Engineer, from salary cut due to lack of funds to promotion with generous raise, Iíve had my share of ups and downs. I won't say I have seen it all but I've seen most aspects of a budding business and I've liked the way a valuable ecosystem can be built from zero.
Since my school days, Iíve always had a knack for taking initiatives and see things from inception to completion. Whether itís responsibility as a cultural head in my school, event organizer and IEEE vice-president in my college or Food committee head and Activity organizer in my office, Iíve discharged them with maximum of my capabilities.
I believe I can build a better career for me as a manager and FMS will be the perfect place for me to accrue those skills. The Wide range of courses and flexibility to customize my own curriculum added with eminent faculty and strong industry exposure easily makes FMS my cardinal choice for MBA.
here is my sop please review it......
I am an engineering student. I want to pursue my career in management because it is a subject of my interest. I would like to know and learn how common ideas can become unique and a success, how companies rise to great heights and what decisions lead to a companyís downfall, how they keep their staff satisfied and how they take out the best from them. Moreover, I wish to see myself in a career that I am interested in so that I am satisfied with my work, as a satisfied mind can bring out productive ideas which bring success in oneís career in turn. I am aware that management is not an easy career but every management career has a starting point and applying for fms is my starting step towards this career.
SOP for FMS. COuld any one please point out how I could make it better. ?
With a strong determination & zeal to imbibe skills in Computer Technology & towards development of softwares which ease's the life of corporates & common man, I joined Aligarh Muslim University, Aligarh,which is one of the finest and intellectually premised universities in India, to pursue B.Tech. in Computers. This profound knowledge temple esthetically laid down a good foundation of technological aspects in me and thus I could develop concrete ideas with relevance to my field. Moreover my strong analytical abilities and a march ahead spirit, helped me in getting placed in Adobe Systems.
The work station has interesting areas to widen my domain of techinal knowledge and to polish my thought pattern in a defined manner. It helped me acknowledge the things that are of cardinal importance for my growth into a thorough professional and a future leader.
Since E-commerce is playing an increasing role in our daily life in India. It is astonishing that with more than a 100 million internet users, the internet penetration in India hasnít yet even touched the 10% mark.
With an strong hold towards helping humans by introducing better technologies & also considering the plethora of opportunities in this sector ,an MBA (MS) degree from FMS will be perfect to put my career on a superb growth path in sync with my dreams and aspirations.
hy i have writen my sop...
can u plz review it n edit it...
rply ASAP plz...
Money matters have always been my area of interest. It not only fascinates me but also propels me to work towards a high-flying career in the field of finance viz. Investment Banking, Corporate Finance etc. Being a fresh grad in commerce background, I feel that a management degree will enhance my innate qualities and give me the opportunity to blend in financial and management aspects. I am confident that my financial concepts and abilitiy to understand financial analysis will aid me in becoming an able manager. A course in management from FMS, one of the premier institutes with an eclectic mix of core subjects and electives for each specialization, distinguished alumni network, international collaborations and state of the art facilities will help me in this regard and pave the path for an illustrious career in finance.
Here's the edited SOP:
Originally Posted by shreya2
Money matters have always been my area of interest. It not only fascinates me but also propels me to work towards a rewarding career in the field of finance viz. Investment Banking, Corporate Finance etc. Being a fresh graduate with a commerce background, I feel that a management degree will enhance my innate qualities and give me the opportunity to blend in financial and management aspects. I am confident that my financial concepts and ability to understand financial analysis will aid me in becoming an able manager. A course in management from FMS, one of the most premier institutes with an eclectic mix of core subjects and electives for each specialization, distinguished alumni network, international collaborations and state of the art facilities will help me in this regard and pave the path for an illustrious career in finance.
here is my sop with some changes
plz edit it...
I want to pursue a career in management. I see myself holding high positions of responsibility in the corporate sector where the decisions I take will have a wide impact on the business prospects of the company. Being a fresh graduate with a commerce background, I feel that a management degree will enhance my innate qualities and give me the opportunity to blend in financial and management aspects. I believe that my financial concepts and ability to understand financial analysis will aid me in becoming an able manager. A course in management from FMS, one of the most premier institutes with an eclectic mix of core subjects and electives for each specialization, distinguished alumni network and international collaborations will acquaint me with the business world and expose me to real business problems through case studies and project work and pave the path for an illustrious career in corporate world.
This is my statement of purpose for FMS. Please consider reviewing it(grammar too) and suggest suitable changes.
My inclination towards Business Management started during my Engineering education through my interest in consistently participating in various Business Events held under TechFests . Winning a couple of these events encouraged me to take up a career in business Management. Having worked in ITes industry amid a progressive work environment I got to learn the fundamentals of Service Sector and incorporated corporate ethics. With this experience, i would like to acquire a more responsible and bigger role in an Organization. The thought of building strategies for Corporate houses gives me adrenaline rush and also is my long term goal.
Hence, FMS would help me learn and hone required skills to thrive on challenges in Management. FMS would also help me to become adaptable to dynamically changing Business Environment and imbibe in me core Corporate values. Its encouraging faculty:student ratio and small yet diversified batch would account for an enriched learning experience. As pointed by an Alumnus,one of the FMS advantage lies in the fact that it being a part of Delhi University, a student can opt for several valuable non-credit courses opted by colleges in vicinity.
Hey everyone,i have written the following SOP for FMS so can you guys comment on how it is and how i can make it better.
I joined Dayananda Sagar College of Engineering, to pursue my B.E. in Electrical & Electronics Engineering. This program not only gave me a good foundation in technology, but also paved the way for me to get in touch with several other distinct fields. And this can get me job in a good company, but this is not where I want to see myself. I donít want to be the job seeker, I want to be a job provider, an entrepreneur.
So, keeping this in mind that FMS is one of the pioneering institutions of management education in India has developed distinct brand equity. The learners here challenge assumptions, think beyond visible limits, and add the value of excellence in whatever they do. I believe that FMS will enrich my source of wisdom and will sharpen my skills to create an extra edge needed for the highly competitive business world.
sop for fms
I am a commerce graduate and have also cleared CA inter. I was the school topper as well as room topper in college in the first two semesters. Although I have got a graduation in commerce and have cleared CA inter, yet I find that there is a dearth of knowledge and skills in me. I want to have more practical knowledge and skills which will help me to achieve my goal of becoming a successful corporate professional and an adept manager.
A MBA degree in finance from a premier institute like FMS will give me that cutting edge advantage and skills I crave for. The excellent faculty, optimum mix of core and elective subjects, vast alumni network, location advantage and diverse as well as competitive peer to peer environment will prepare me for the dynamic corporate world and equip me with the necessary skills to climb the corporate ladder.
plz review my sop...have very less time...thanks in adv
SOP for FMS
Guys, I have written this SOP for FMS. Please suggest corrections.(150 words)
"You only live once, so make it worth it and live your dreams, never say never and be fearless." I want to think about my career in exactly the same way beacuse I have got only one life to achieve my goals. I aspire to be a successful manager whose decisions would play an important role in the growth of his firm.I also want to focus on my individual growth alongwith the growth of my firm.Also, I have a long term goal of starting my own business venture. For realising these, I have to be diligent and acquire the right skills. And I believe FMS has the right exposure and environment from where I can learn those. So, an MBA from FMS will certainly put my career on a right track which would be in sync with my goals.
I would like to tell my strong points. I am pro-active and always willing to take calculated risks. I have strong organisational capabilities. This would definitely help me in my career.
SOP FOR FMS-
"I wish to become a financial analyst .After gaining knowledge about how the financial system of the country, aided by monetary and fiscal policies functions, the manner in which trading market works , and the multifarious investment strategies for maximising profits , I decided to go for Financial management as i found all this very enticing .
A degree in MBA from an esteemed college like FMS will help me strengthen my decision making and risk management skills that are essential , and help me gain in depth knowledge of accountancy and overall management and get me a step closer to my goal of becoming a successful financial analyst.Contributing towards the society and helping it prosper would be my long term goal ."
SOP for FMS (BDS background)- Please help
I have done BDS and want to pursue MBA because of less job opportunities, So need some help on what should I write in SOP. Do I write it keeping in mind some specialisation like business, marketing etc? As I dont have much experience in these fields, it becomes difficult to convincingly compile thoughts for SOP. Can somebody please guide me in this direction?
Would be a great help!!
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